I love here eyes and expression on the top one. Great job!!
ooooooooh sexy (>.<Vn
VERY awesome, you working on a coloured version?
thats a nice drawing. i like it
LESS CLOTHES PLZ!
Very nice, this is definately a nice change from your usual work. I like the composition play as well. The center of action that runs through the character is also very elegant and natural. I still feel however, that your anatomy with the length between the shoulders and hips is very unbalanced. Thought I think shape wise they are very consistent with normal shoulders. I definately enjoy the look of these two. +fav from me.
Thanks for the critique~ I'm trying so hard to fix that problem, but I don't seem to be able to solve it. D:
If I can I'll make some scans of the handoouts I've been receiving in class. See if I can add some comments on where I think you could learn the landmarks of the body and the relative qualities they share with one another. If you've got anything to ask me, send meh a note. I won't claim to be anything consistent with a good or great artist. But I feel like I saavy a couple of concepts with drawing that I would like to share with you.
This is an odd variation from your normal style. She's one skinny em-effer.